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Great one! Really loved the art style and voice acting on this one.

Very nice animation, voice acting, and all around just another great short!

The joke was acceptable, I think you could've done abit more with it. However, your animation is improving and the audio quality was fairly good. Keep it up!

Chauder responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Helpful :D

The animation is colorful, crisp, and character designs look good! Voice acting was a mixed bag, at times being excellent while at others being alittle forced, but an overall decent. As for the dialogue and jokes this time around, I had a few chuckles at the dialogue here and there. Overall, a pretty solid effort! Keep it up!!

Well that was interesting! Now you have me curious about the upcoming parts, and how they will manage to piece this thing together.

ClockworkPixel responds:

be sure to check out newgrounds on friday then :D hopefully part 2 can keep you interested for part 3

The animation is crisp, well-drawn, and colorful. However, the dialogue is abit to juvenile constantly spitting out unfunny sex jokes that fail to bring in even a single chuckle throughout this short. Voice acting was also pretty wooden but not terrible. Overall, the short has potential although at it's current state, I'd say it's simply just watchable and nothing else.

BestQuest responds:

Appreciate the critique, we'll work on improving! Thanks for watching!

Not bad! I think with more time put into it you could have some pretty fluid animation overall.

BretLinne responds:

Thank you much. I believe this will come out nicely and will accent the title screen well.

Can't really understand how it's a parody as the entire thing is merely a copy and paste of the original work only with your webcam frames in replacement. The frames are also pretty low quality, and overall this isn't new nor interesting. Not a very good start for your first submission.

maxdepier responds:

cause things aren't the same when the visual design changes , and you'r sorta right , it may not be a parody of Eddsworld but its a parody of animation itself , for when things get a more "real life" vibe , things can get a more weird or funny look , i'm interested in making it since really there is no one else who does the stuff i do ,
as for the low quality , i can't help it , i don't have the money to just buy a camera , and i'm not going to sit and do nothing , maybe one day in the future i'll get one...

I would like to see more of your efforts. The animation looks pretty promising for a warm-up.

Can you please stop deleting your efforts due to negative feedback? It's there for a reason. I'm not trying to be harsh, but every single one of these flashes just are not very good. The animation is poor, the voices are chipmunk-like and unfitting to the characters, and the dialogue is just so incoherent. Keep trying.

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