DevvyBoyOllie's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[AI - Johnny VS Spiders]

The joke was alittle too simplistic, and the dialogue wasn't all to clever. The animation was passable, it's fluid but the character designs just look weird, but I suppose that's nitpicking. Aside from that, the voice acting was decent and the audio quality was pretty solid. I think you could have potential so long as you keep trying and working on the jokes. Keep Trying!

scpgames responds:

I’m not sure what kind of joke you were expecting, but I think this is one of those situations where “If you didn’t like it, then you didn’t get it.” I also can’t take you seriously about the character designs based on your avatar. I hope the voice acting was good considering I do all the characters. I’m glad you think I have potential. Gosh golly I hope I make it somewhere.

Oh I do miss Newgrounds... sarcasm sarcasm sarcasm.

[Write in Time]

Excellent Flash! Jokes are solid, animation is nice and fluid, and voice acting is wonderfully well done! Keep it up!

WaldFlieger responds:

Hey, thanks a lot!! :D

[september 9, 2014]

Looks like we are literally on a similar page. Sometimes, there are days where everything feels blue and underwhelming, or as the video proclaimed in very few sequences repetition. I guess my advice would be to try doing something, you normally wouldn't do. Anyway, aside from that the animation is nice and fluid as always, even despite the brief run time. One thing I really admire about your efforts is just how unique your ideas can be. Keep up the great work!

tylerghardin responds:

hey thanks a ton bud! this comment brightened my day. yeah, it's strange, some days feel bluer than others. it gets weird and inconsistent. i just gotta calm down and get comfortable where i am. thanks for all the positive remarks about both the idea/visual quality, considering i spent very little time on both. i just needed to make something. thanks again.

[White Girl Foundation]

Okay! Next up on the list, well this wasn't as generic as the let's player short posted earlier. Animation is fine enough, audio's nice and clear, but the joke was just meh. I think that's really the only problem with your shorts, is that the joke or premise that's involved just never really comes off as very funny nor enjoyable. Now, its not terrible by any stretch again but I think you're capable of pulling off something alittle more hilarious than the obvious stereotypes.

Chauder responds:

yea, im gonna start working on my joke writing :)

[The Lovetower]

The animation is great, I love the art style of this music animation. Now, I do have some nitpicks due to the compression of the audio quality made it difficult to hear certain parts of lyrics, although the song is not bad at all. Maybe next time, you can implement some subtitles to flow with the lyrics incase people have trouble listening. Overall, Very Good Job!

SplinterNrurse responds:

I think I might have screwed the audio a bit up when I converted the FLV to a mp4, I'll look into it when i find the time.

Thanks for the feedback!

[Mythical Pantaloons]

Nice animation, and a pretty funny setup overall! The voice acting was good, but the delivery got alittle shaky in a line or two. Other than that, Great Job!

Potatoman responds:

Thank-you thing i put in my martini

[No.]

Not bad for your second submission. The animation is very simple, and the plotline isn't anything I haven't seen before. However, the added lighting and tiny bloom likes effects were pretty nice. If there's anything you need to improve on, it would have to be to try to expand on the gestures alittle more namely because its kind of hard to assume what the character was going through with his stiff movements. Music was also nice, so overall good job!

Dalas responds:

Thank you very much for your review SummerOlives!!
Ill try to improve on my works asap ^^
Thanks!

[Dan vs. Reptile]

The fight was decent, nice use of effects they felt like they popped alittle more in color for whatever reason. Nothing really to complain about aside from the simplicity.

SebzX12 responds:

thnx.

[sign language]

Very fluid animation, it almost reminds me of Bob's Burgers. The dialogue was hilarious and consistent throughout, and the delivery from the characters were nearly flawless. Keep it up!

tylerghardin responds:

hey thanks! i love bob's burgers, so that's a huge compliment. thanks again.

[Subzero vs. Ken]

Ah, plagiarism at its finest.

No, but seriously, I liked it despite its simplicity. The animation was more fluid, for what little story there is at least it explains why their fighting, but I cringed alittle at the part where Ken is begging for his life. Overall, I liked it.

SebzX12 responds:

thnx